Time : 2020-03-11 17:20:57
Điểm: 8/10
Five powerful countries pledged to comply with
Treaty on the Non-Proliferation of Nuclear Weapons

On March 10th, top diplomats of the U.S, China, England, France and Russia gave a seal of robust approval to Non-Proliferation Treaty (NPT) on the occasion of 50th year since this document first came into effect.

In the joint statement, Secretaries of State of 5 forceful nuclear-weaponed countries re-confirmed that these countries all gave word of honor to adhere to NPT with a view to pursuing negotiations about effective ways towards nuclear dissolution. Parties highly assessed significant contributions, which have been brought about by this historic document since it entered into force, to the security and the prosperity of citizens all over the world.

Secretaries of State also gave a warning that nothing could guarantee the success of NPT in the future and emphasized that it depended on the efforts in collaboration as well as consistent maintain of powerful nuclear countries.

NPT was passed by United Nations General Assembly in 1968 and has came into effort since March 5th, 1970.

Nhận xét của giáo viên :

Five powerful countries pledged dùng hiện tại đơn để miêu tả sự cam kết cho hiện tại hoặc tương lai to comply with Treaty on the Non-Proliferation of Nuclear Weapons

On March 10th, top diplomats of the U.S, China, England, France and Russia gave a seal of robust strong (miêu tả vật) approval to Non-Proliferation Treaty (NPT) on the occasion of 50th year anniversary of the entry that since this document (là lễ kỉ niệm nên không dùng mệnh đề since, mà dùng mệnh đề quan hệ để giải thích) first came into effect.

In the joint statement, Secretaries of State for Foreign Affairs of 5 forceful nuclear-weaponed countries re-confirmed that these countries all gave word of honor to adhere to NPT with a view to pursuing negotiations about effective ways towards nuclear dissolution. Parties highly assessed significant contributions, which have been brought about by this historic document treaty since it entered into force, to the security and the prosperity of citizens all over the world.

Secretaries of State for Foreign Affairs also gave a warning that nothing could guarantee the success of NPT in the future and emphasized that it depended on the efforts in collaboration as well as consistent maintain dùng danh từ sau tính từ of powerful nuclear countries.

NPT was passed by United Nations General Assembly in 1968 and it has came dùng cột 3 của bảng động từ bắt quy tắc khi dùng PII into effort since March 5th, 1970.

 

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