Time : 2020-03-15 20:56:40
Điểm: 8/10
Five great powers pledged to comply with the Treaty on the Non-Proliferation of Nuclear Weapons

On March 10, the top diplomats of the United States, China, United Kingdom, France and Russia expressed strong support for the Treaty on the Non-Proliferation of Nuclear Weapons (NPT) on its 50th anniversary.

In the joint statement, the Ministers of foreign affairs of the five nuclear-weapon superpowers reaffirmed that these countries pledged to comply with the NPT to pursue of negotiations on effective measures related to nuclear disarmament. The Parties greatly appreciated the substantial contributions that this historical document has made to the security and prosperity of the people all over the world after the treaty entered into force.

The foreign ministers warned that nothing could guarantee the success of the NPT in the future, they emphasized that this would depend on the concerted and sustained efforts of the nuclear powers.

The NPT was passed by the United Nations General Assembly in 1968 and entered into force on and from March 5, 1970.

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Five great powers pledged to comply with the Treaty on the Non-Proliferation of Nuclear Weapons

On March 10, the top diplomats of the United States, China, United Kingdom, France and Russia expressed strong support for to (giới từ dùng với express) the Treaty on the Non-Proliferation of Nuclear Weapons (NPT) on its 50th anniversary.

In the joint statement, the Ministers of foreign affairs of the five nuclear-weapon superpowers reaffirmed that these countries pledged to comply with the NPT to pursue of negotiations on effective measures related to nuclear disarmament. The Parties greatly appreciated the substantial contributions that this historical document has made to the security and prosperity of the people all over the world after since (mốc thời gian) the treaty entered into force.

The foreign ministers warned that nothing could guarantee the success of the NPT in the future, and they emphasized that this would depend on the concerted and sustained efforts of the nuclear powers.

The NPT was passed by the United Nations General Assembly in 1968 and entered into force on and from bạn dùng động từ ở quá khứ nên chỉ cần dùng on + ngày tháng năm hoặc bạn có thể dùng hiện tại hoàn thành với sicne March 5, 1970.

 

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Điểm: 8.5