Time : 2020-03-04 20:37:29
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Japan stated to be ready for holding Olympic Tokyo defiance of COVID-19nnAccording to Reuters, on March 4th, Chief Cabinet Secretary Yoshihide Suga stated that the country was ready for Holding Tokyo Summer Olympic as they expected, in situation that appears a rumour that that event can be delayed due to severe acute respiratory infection COVID-19.nnOn March 3rd, Olympic Minister Seiko Hashimoto said that the agreement between Tokyo and International Olympic Committee (IOC) could be brought out to allow to delay Olympic to the end of that year. However, Mrs. Hashimoto reclaimed that the Government committed to hold Tokyo Summer Olympic on July 24th.nnAccording to the agreement, delay and cancellation right will be decided by IOC. According to Mrs. Hashimoto, the delay for holding Olympic will be costly. The latest budget, which will be spent holding 2020 Tokyo Olympic and Paralympic, is $12.51 billion.

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nnAccording to Reuters, on March 4th, Chief Cabinet Secretary Yoshihide Suga stated that the country was ready for Holding dùng to V Tokyo Summer Olympic as they expected, in the situation that appears a rumour that that event can be delayed due to severe acute respiratory infection COVID-19.

nnEarlier On March 3rd, Olympic Minister Seiko Hashimoto said that the agreement between Tokyo and International Olympic Committee (IOC) could be brought out to allow to delay Olympic chú ý cấu trúc allow doing sth hoặc allow sb to do sth; trường hợp này bạn nên dùng thể bị động với allow sth to be done (allow Olympics to be delayed) to until the end of that year 2020. However, Mrs. Hashimoto reclaimed that the Government remained committed to hold Tokyo Summer Olympic on July 24th.

nnAccording to the agreement, delay and cancellation right will be decided by IOC. According to Mrs. Hashimoto, the delay for holding Olympic will be costly. The latest budget, which will be spent on holding 2020 Tokyo Olympic and Paralympic, is $12.51 billion.

 

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