Time : 2020-02-23 18:02:42
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Sonic sets a new record of revenue for cartoon adaptation of video game
With 57 million USD which gains from the cinemas in North America last week, Sonic the Hedgehog has just became the movie adaptation of video games that has the highest-grossing opening movie all the time, outpacing the record which was set by “Detective Pikachu” movies with 54 million of USD.
In the markets outside North America, “Sonic the Hedgehog” is also given a warm welcome, with the revenue after three days of being shown to 44.3 million USD.
Based on a famous game worldwide which was created by Sega since 1991, “Sonic the Hedgehog” is about the journey to discover a new life in the Earth of Sonic – a porcupine has the ability to run in supersonic speed (Ben Schwartz dubbed). He cooperates with a sheriff named Tom (James Marsden acted) to prevent the scheme of the villain – Dr. Robotnik (Jim Carrey acted).
Until this moment, the games about this supersonic porcupine sold hundreds of million worldwide. However, the work of adaptation to movies for “Sonic the Hedgehog” is quite difficult.

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Sonic sets đã xảy ra và hoàn tất trong quá khứ nên dùng quá khứ đơn a new record of revenue for cartoon adaptation of video game
With 57 million USD which gains was collected from the cinemas in North America last week, Sonic the Hedgehog has just became dùng cột 3 của bảng động từ bất quy tắc đối với PII the movie adaptation of video games danh từ số ít that has the highest-grossing opening movie all the time, outpacing the record which was set by “Detective Pikachu” movies with 54 million of USD.
In the markets outside North America, “Sonic the Hedgehog” is also given dùng quá khứ đơn a warm welcome, with the revenue after three days of being shown to 44.3 million USD.
Based on a famous game worldwide which was created by Sega since in 1991, “Sonic the Hedgehog” is about the journey to discover a new life in the Earth of Sonic – a porcupine which (dùng mệnh đề quan hệ để giải thích cho danh từ a porcupine vì danh từ này là ngữ đồng vị giải thích cho Sonic has the ability to run in supersonic speed (Ben Schwartz dubbed). He cooperates with a sheriff named Tom (James Marsden acted) to prevent the scheme of the villain – Dr. Robotnik (Jim Carrey acted).
Until this moment now, the games about this supersonic porcupine sold dùng hiện tại hoàn thành với until now hundreds of million worldwide. However, the work of adaptation to movies for “Sonic the Hedgehog” is dùng quá khứ đơn vì hành động đã xảy ra và hoàn tất trong quá khứ quite difficult.

 

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