Time : 2020-02-13 10:12:26
Điểm: 7/10
The story of a Malaysian doctor who chose to stay in China during the epidemic season

Since the outbreak of an acute respiratory infection caused by novel coronavirus (2019-nCov), naturally, many foreigners in China had sought to return their homeland to "escape" from the epidemic.
How ever, some people still choose to stay to help fight against the epidemic although there are many risks. Doctor Lee Chongyou, a Malaysian, is one of the people.

At the age of 36, when the desire to live and contribute to life as well as the joy of family reunion, friends in the recent Lunar New Year Holiday that could make a young person like Lee Chongyou to decide to return Malaysia. But the conscience of a doctor kept the cardiologist in the epidemic country.

As usual, his working day at Peking University People's Hospital starts at 8:00 AM during the time of outbreak of the epidemic and ends only the time when he hands over the work to his colleagues in night shift. The only difference in these days is that he wears protective glasses, a mask and keeps a distance from patients when he visits them.

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The story of a Malaysian doctor who chose to stay in China during the epidemic season

Since the outbreak of an acute respiratory infection caused by novel coronavirus (2019-nCov), naturally, many foreigners in China had sought nên dùng hiện tại hoàn thành để chỉ hành động bắt đầu trong quá khứ và kéo dài đến hiện tại với since to return their homeland to "escape" from the epidemic.
How ever chú ý viết liền từ nối, some people still choose to stay to help fight against the epidemic although there are many risks. Doctor Lee Chongyou, a Malaysian, is one of the people them (đại từ thay thế).

At the age of 36, when chỉ có 1 mệnh đề, nên không dùng mệnh đề trạng ngữ when the desire to live and contribute to life as well as the joy of family reunion, friends reunion in the recent Lunar New Year Holiday chủ ngữ that động từ, do đó không dùng mệnh đề quan hệ could make a young person like Lee Chongyou to decide to return Malaysia. But the conscience of a doctor has (nên dùng hiện tại) kept the cardiologist in the epidemic country.

As usual, his working day at Peking University People's Hospital starts at 8:00 AM during the time of outbreak of the epidemic and ends only the time when he hands over the work to his colleagues in night shift. The only difference in these days is that he wears protective glasses, a mask and keeps a distance from patients when he visits them.

 

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