Time : 2020-02-16 21:51:40
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The story about a Malaysian doctor with his decision to stay in China fighting epidemic

Since the acute respiratory epidemic resulted from a new strain of coronavirus (2019-nCoV) broke out, many foreigners in China find a way to run away from their hometown to escape the epidemic.

But there're still people choosing to stay here in order to give a hand in effort no matter there involves a lot of risk. Lee Chongyou, a Malaysian doctor, is one of them.

At the age of 36, when the will to live and dedicate life to the society as well as the happiness of gathering with friends and families in recent Lunar New Year holiday, can make a young doctor like Lee Chongyou decide to come back to Malaysia. But the conscience of a the cardiologist has kept him stay in this place where the dangerous epidemic is taking place.

As usual, his working routine at Beijing University People's hospital, while the epidemic is still raging, starts from 8 o'clock in the morning and only finishes until he handovers the work to his night shift partners. The only difference these days is he has to wear a pair of protective goggles, a face mask and keep his distance from patients when doing the check-on.

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The story about a Malaysian doctor with his decision to stay in China fighting epidemic nên dùng to V chỉ mục đích

Since the acute respiratory epidemic resulted from a new strain of coronavirus (2019-nCoV) broke out, many foreigners in China find dùng hiện tại hoàn thành với since a way to run away from their hometown to escape the epidemic.

But there're still people choosing to stay here in order to give a hand in effort no matter although (no matter how/ no matter what) there involves are a lot of risks danh từ số nhiều. Lee Chongyou, a Malaysian doctor, is one of them.

At the age of 36, when đã có cụm trạng ngữ at the age of 36 rồi thì không cần mệnh đề when the will to live and dedicate life to the society as well as the happiness of gathering with friends and families in recent Lunar New Year holiday, can make a young doctor like Lee Chongyou decide to come back to Malaysia. But the conscience of a the cardiologist has kept him stay in this place where the dangerous epidemic is taking place.

As usual, his working routine at Beijing University People's hospital, while the epidemic is still raging, starts from 8 o'clock in the morning and only finishes until he handovers the work to his night shift partners. The only difference these days is that (mệnh đề danh ngữ) he has to wear a pair of protective goggles, a face mask and keep his distance from patients when doing the check-on.

 

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