Time : 2020-02-13 18:46:39
Điểm: 8/10
The story whose topic is that a Malaysian doctor made up his mind to stay in China during the epidemic

Since the acute respiratory tract infection resulting from a new strain of coronavirus (2019-nCoV), many people naturally have made an effort to come back to their hometown to run away from the epidemic.

Meanwhile, it was a large number of people who took their pick of staying with an aim to join hands to drive back this epidemic irrespective of its risks. Dr. Lee Chongyou, whose nationality is Malaysia, is one of whom.

At the age of 36, life aspiration and contribution to life as well as the pleasure of gathering family and friends in the past Lunar New Year holiday could have made a young man like Lee Chongyou make his choice to come back to Malaysia. Nevertheless, the conscience as a doctor made this doctor whose specialty is about cardiovascular stay at the country where the epidemic is raging.

As usual, a day of his working at Peking University People's Hospital during the time of the epidemic begins at 8.00 a.m. and only ends when he hands over the work to his night duty associates. The only difference these days is that he wears a pair of protective glasses, a mask and put some distance with patients when asking after their health.

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The story whose topic is that a Malaysian doctor made up his mind to stay in China during the epidemic

Since the acute respiratory tract infection resulting from a new strain of coronavirus (2019-nCoV), many people naturally have made an effort to come back to their hometown to run away from the epidemic.

Meanwhile, it was a large number of people who took nên dùng hiện tại đơn chỉ thực trạng của vẫn đề their pick of staying with an aim to join hands to drive back this epidemic irrespective of its risks. Dr. Lee Chongyou, whose nationality is Malaysian chỉ quốc tịch chứ không phải tên nước, is one of whom them (chỉ dùng đại từ quan hệ để giải thích cho danh từ).

At the age of 36, life aspiration and contribution to life as well as the pleasure of gathering with family and friends in the past Lunar New Year holiday could have made a young man like Lee Chongyou make his choice to come back to Malaysia. Nevertheless, the conscience as of a doctor made this doctor whose specialty is about cardiovascular stay at in the country where the epidemic is raging.

As usual, a day of his working at Peking University People's Hospital during the time of the epidemic begins at 8.00 a.m. and only ends when he hands over the work to his night shift colleagues duty associates. The only difference these days is that he wears a pair of protective glasses, a mask and put keeps some distance with from patients when asking after their health.

 

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Điểm: 8.5