Time : 2020-02-16 20:06:59
Điểm: 7/10
The Malaysian Doctor who chooses to stay in China during the epidemic

Since the outbreak of the acute respiratory infection caused by a new strain of coronavirus (2019-nCoV), of course, many foreigners in China have found the way to return to their country to "get away from" the epidemic.

However, there are still many people who choose to stay and fight side by side against this deadly disease in spite of numerous risks. Doctor Lee Chongyou, who comes from Malaysia, is one of them.

At the age of 36, when the desire to live and devote as well as the happiness with family and his friends reunion in the last Lunar New Year holiday can make a young man like Lee Chongyou decide to return to Malaysia, the heart of a cardiovascular physician makes him stay in the epicenter of the epidemic.

As usual, amid the epidemic, his working day at People’s Hospital of Peking University begins at 8 am and finishes when he hands over the work to his night shift colleagues. The only difference these days is that he wears a pair of protective glasses, a mask and keeps distance from the patients when he examines the patient's health.

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The story about The Malaysian Doctor who chooses to stay in China during the epidemic

Since the outbreak of the acute respiratory infection caused by a new strain of coronavirus (2019-nCoV), of course, many foreigners in China have found the way to return to their country to "get away from" the epidemic.

However, there are still many people who choose to stay and fight side by side against this deadly disease in spite of numerous nên dùng a lot of để chỉ nhiều rủi ro sẽ hợp lý hơn risks. Doctor Lee Chongyou, who comes from Malaysia, is one of them.

At the age of 36, when đã có cụm trạng ngữ at the age of 36 rồi thì không cần mệnh đề when the desire to live and devote as well as the happiness with family and his friends danh từ số ít trước danh từ khác reunion in the last Lunar New Year holiday làm chủ ngữ can make a young man like Lee Chongyou decide to return to Malaysia cụm động từ, nên tách ý theo yêu cầu đề bài the heart of a cardiovascular physician makes him stay in the epicenter of the epidemic.

As usual, amid the epidemic, his working day at People’s Hospital of Peking University begins at 8 am and finishes when he hands over the work to his night shift colleagues. The only difference these days is that he wears a pair of protective glasses, a mask and keeps distance from the patients when he examines checks/ asks the patient's health.

 

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