Time : 2020-01-15 21:50:57
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Volkswagen attempts to protect their first ranking in car manufacture
The German car manufacturing firm, Volkswagen, announced their business result of 2019, according to which, its car sales held a record number of 10.970.000 ones, increasing compared to the number 10.830.000 of 2018.
With the outcome, Volkswagen hopes that they can remain their title as the largest car manufacturer in the world that they gained in 2018, after defeating the other competitors, Renault-Nissan-Mitsubishi League and Toyota.
The result shows Volkswagen’s business situation is positive regardless of the general decrease in the car business over the world. It also means that the market share of the firm will increase as a result.
Its sales have increased due to the positive business in the home markets namely Germany, the US, Brazil while the figure in Asian – Pacific market has dropped.
The title as the largest car manufacturer had been monopolized by the American firm, General Motors, for over 7 decades until the company lost the position to Toyota in 2008.

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Volkswagen attempts to protect their first ranking position in car manufacture
The German car manufacturing firm, Volkswagen, announced their business result of in 2019, according to in which, its car sales held reached a record number of 10.970.000 ones, increasing compared to the number 10.830.000 of in 2018.
With the outcome, Volkswagen hopes that they it (thay thế 1 cho công ty) can remain their title its position as the largest car manufacturer in the world that they gained in 2018, after defeating the other competitors, Renault-Nissan-Mitsubishi League and Toyota.
The result shows Volkswagen’s business situation is positive regardless of the general decrease in the car business over the world. It also means that the market share of the firm will increase as a result.đã dùng động từ means rồi
Its sales have increased due to the positive business in the home markets namely Germany, the US, Brazil while the figure in Asian – Pacific market has dropped.đã xảy ra nên dùng quá khứ đơn
The title position as the largest car manufacturer had been monopolized by the American firm, General Motors, for over 7 decades until the company lost the position to Toyota in 2008.

 

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