Time : 2020-01-19 20:48:13
Điểm: 8/10
Volkswagen makes an attempt to maintain its foothold as the world’s biggest car manufacturer

German automobile manufacturer Volkswagen announced the business results of 2019, accordingly, this year sales reached the record 10,970,000 units, which is increasing from 10,830,000 units versus 2018.

With this business results, Volkswagen expects that the company can maintain its title as the world’s biggest car manufacturer that it won in 2018, after “beating" other rivals such as the Renault-Nissan Mitsubishi alliance and Toyota.

The aforementioned results show that Volkswagen's business performance is positive despite the general downward trend in the global automobile market. It means that its market share will increase.

Sales increased thanks to positive business results in its home market in Germany, the United States and Brazil, however, sales slipped in the Asia-Pacific markets.

The tittle of world's top carmaker has been dominated by the US automaker General Motors for more than seven decades before it lost the title to Toyota in 2008.

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Volkswagen makes an attempt to maintain its foothold as the world’s biggest largest car manufacturer

German automobile manufacturer Volkswagen announced the business results of 2019, accordingly, this year sales reached the record 10,970,000 units, which is increasing dùng quá khứ đơn from 10,830,000 units versus 2018.

With this business results, Volkswagen expects that the company can maintain its title as the world’s biggest largest car manufacturer that it won in 2018, after “beating" other rivals such as the Renault-Nissan Mitsubishi alliance and Toyota.

The aforementioned results show that Volkswagen's business performance is positive despite the general downward trend in the global automobile market. It means that its market share will increase.dùng hiện tại đơn

Sales increased thanks to positive business results in its home market in Germany, the United States and Brazil, however, sales slipped in the Asia-Pacific markets.

The tittle of world's top carmaker has been dominated dùng quá khứ đơn với hành động xảy ra trước hành động khác trong quá khứ khi dùng before by the US automaker General Motors for more than seven decades before it lost the title to Toyota in 2008.

 

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