Time : 2019-11-14 10:49:58
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Zimbabwe officially put several brand new bills into circulation
It was on November 12 that the national bank of Zimbabwe officially put some new kinds of bill and coin into circulation for sake of alleviating cash scarcity, which inherently was perceived as one of the reasons constraining this African country's economic development that inherently dipped into downturn.
Brand new bills taken into currently-circulated bills expected to help increase the money supply for the market. Nevertheless, the national bank of Zimbabwe also restricted the amount of money which every inhabitant be permitted to withdraw from their account to 18 USD per week.
In 2009, super inflation in Zimbabwe once in a while was up to 500 billion percent which caused the Zimbabwean dollar to become valueless in the reality and required this country's government to abandon local currency and depend on USD and neighbor's currency (Rand South African currency). Although the new currency was officially put into circulation, the scarcity of cash in Zimbabwe is on-going. It takes residents hours to line up withdrawing cash.

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Zimbabwe officially put several brand new bills into circulation
It was on November 12 that the national bank of Zimbabwe officially put some new kinds of bills and coins danh từ số nhiều into circulation for sake of alleviating cash scarcity, which inherently was perceived as one of the reasons constraining this African country's economic development that inherently dipped dùng thể bị động into downturn.
Brand new bills taken into currently-circulated bills expected dùng thể bị động to help increase the money supply for the market. Nevertheless, the national bank of Zimbabwe also restricted the amount of money which every inhabitant be chia động từ tobe permitted to withdraw from their account to 18 USD per week.
In 2009, super inflation in Zimbabwe once in a while was up to 500 billion percent , which caused the Zimbabwean dollar to become valueless in the reality and required this country's government to abandon local currency and depend on USD and neighbor's currency (Rand South African currency). Although the new currency was officially put into circulation, the scarcity of cash in Zimbabwe is on-going. It takes residents hours to line up withdrawing dùng cụm từ chỉ mục đích cash.

 

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