Time : 2019-10-06 20:28:42
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The U.S production fell the lowest level in 10 years
The U.S manufacturing sector continued to slow down in September and fell to the lowest level since 2009. It is the result of survey by the U.S Institute for Supply Management (ISM) released on October 1st. According to ISM, it was the second consecutive month that the U.S production plunged and kept on the downtrend since March.
The survey showed the September's production index fell to 47,8 %, a sharply decreasing from 49,1% over previous month. The manufacturing index below of 50 threshold is a sign of reduction.
Many said that the trade competition between The U.S and China with mutual retaliation on tariff is hurting the business activities and going down the confidence despite the U.S officials claimed the world's largest economy not to affect by trade war.

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The U.S production fell the lowest level in 10 years
The U.S manufacturing sector continued to slow down in September and fell to the lowest level since 2009. It is the result of survey by the U.S Institute for Supply Management (ISM) released on October 1st. According to ISM, it was is the second consecutive month that the U.S production plunged dùng hiện tại hoàn thành với cấu trúc this is the second month and kept on the downtrend since March.dùng mệnh đề quan hệ hoặc rút gọn mệnh đề quan hệ
The survey showed the September's production index fell to 47,8 %, a sharply decreasing dùng cumj danh từ from 49,1% over previous month. The manufacturing index below of 50 threshold is a sign of reduction.
Many thiếu danh từ sau many said that the trade competition between The U.S and China with mutual retaliation on tariff is hurting the business activities and going down the confidence despite the U.S officials claimed the world's largest economy not to affect by trade war.dùng despite + danh từ

 

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