Time : 2019-10-02 16:59:00
Điểm: 8/10
The U.S. manufacturing dives to the lowest level within 10 years

It was the U.S manufacturing that carried on slowing down in September, diving to the lowest level since 2009. This is the result of a survey announced by the U.S. Institute for Supply Management (ISM) on October 1st. Based on the ISM's data, this was the second month in a row the U.S. manufacturing has plunged, continuing a slowing trend since March.

What was proclaimed by the agency's survey was that the September manufacturing index decreased 47,8 percent, a sharp drop in comparison with the number of 49,1 percent of the previous month. That the manufacturing index is below 50 indicates a step backwards.

A wide variety of ideas point out that the trade competition between the U.S. and China along with the mutual retaliatory tariffs are hurting business and undermining confidence, regardless of the U.S. authorities claiming that Americans have not been influenced by the trade war.

Nhận xét của giáo viên :

The U.S. manufacturing dives to the lowest level within 10 years

It was the U.S manufacturing that carried on slowing down in September, diving to the lowest level since 2009. This is the result of a survey announced by the U.S. Institute for Supply Management (ISM) on October 1st. Based on the ISM's data, this was is the second month in a row the U.S. manufacturing has plunged, continuing a slowing dùng từ cần rõ ràng hơn trend since March.

What was proclaimed by the agency's survey was that the September manufacturing index decreased 47,8 percent, a sharp drop in comparison with the number of 49,1 percent of the previous month. That the manufacturing index is dùng quá khứ đơn below 50 indicates a step backwards.

A wide variety of ideas point out that the trade competition between the U.S. and China along with the mutual retaliatory tariffs are hurting chia động từ theo chủ ngữ ngôi thư ba số ít the trade competition between the U.S. and China business and undermining confidence, regardless of the U.S. authorities claiming nên dùng danh từ và sở hữu cách trước nó that Americans have not been influenced dùng danh từ nền kinh tế và chia động từ theo danh từ đó by the trade war.

 

Nhìn chung, bài dịch của bạn dịch  ý rõ ràng, ý dịch hay, có nhiều cấu trúc hay. Tuy nhiên, có 1 số lỗi từ loại cũng như thì của động từ cần phải chú ý nhé.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Điểm: 8.5