Time : 2019-09-18 14:23:39
Điểm: 7/10
Thank-you letter of nine-year old girl for the school's cleaner



Beside the praises from the little girl to the cleaner because she did her work well, in content of the letter, the little girl did not forget to say thank you, as well as drawing a picture for the cleaner.



The social network shares of Khairunnisa Afifah, the daughter of the cleaner, received the attention and like from the online community. She wrote on Twitter." My mother does cleaning work in SJKC school. Today, I'm very appreciated by what the little girl does for my mom. The work and the effort of my mom are recognized and highly appreciated."

The girl named Abigail, 9 years old, 3rd grade student, SJKC school (Malaysia). Abigail had sent her thanks to the female cleaner named Mak Cil. Beside the nice thanks, Aligail also draw a pretty picture for Mrs Mak Cik.

The status of the female cleaner's daughter quickly received the attention from online community, with nearly 40 shares and likes at that time.

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Thank-you letter of nine-year old girl for the school's cleaner

Beside the praises from the little girl to the cleaner because she did her work well, in content of the letter nên để trạng ngữ ở đầu câu, the little girl did not forget to say thank you, as well as drawing chú ý tương quan thì của động từ khi liệt kê a picture for the cleaner.

The social network shares of Khairunnisa Afifah, the daughter of the cleaner, received the attention and likes from the online community. She wrote on Twitter." My mother does cleaning work in SJKC school. Today, I'm very appreciated by what the little girl does for my mom. The work and the effort of my mom are recognized and highly appreciated."nên chú ý trích dẫn cho chính xác

The girl named Abigail, 9 years old, 3rd grade student, SJKC school (Malaysia). Abigail had sent dùng quá khứ đơn đối với hành động xảy ra và hoàn tất trong quá khứ her thanks to the female cleaner named Mak Cil. Beside the nice thanks, Aligail also draw a pretty picture for Mrs Mak Cik.

The status of the female cleaner's daughter quickly received the attention from online community, with nearly 40 shares and likes at that time.

Bạn dịch bài có 1 số ý chưa được tốt: cách trích dẫn, tương quan động từ khi liệt kê, thì của động từ. Cố gắng hơn nhé.

Điểm: 7.5