Time : 2019-09-18 22:20:29
Điểm: 7/10
The letter in appreciation of the school's cleaner of a 9-year-old girl
The content of the letter apart from the compliment of the girl to the female cleaner for her well-done. The girl also send her appreciation along with a patting for the female cleaner
The article on the social network of Khairunnisa Afifah who is the daughter of the female cleaner attracted attention and love from community networks. She tweeted on Twitter " My mom works as a cleaner at SJKC school. Today, I am so sensitive for things that the girl did for my mom. My mother's work and effort are appreciated".
The girl's name is Abigail Tan, 9 years old, grade three, SJKC school (Malaysia). Abigail sent her thank to the female cleaner called Mak Cik. Apart from the adorable letter of appreciation, Abigail also drew an adorable painting for Ms. Mak Cik.
Status of the daughter of the female cleaner promptly was attracting the attention of community networks, with approximately 40 shares and likes at that time.

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The letter in appreciation of thanking the school's cleaner of a 9-year-old girl
The content of the letter thiếu động từ ở mệnh đề này apart from the compliments of the girl to the female cleaner for her well-done job (dùng cụm danh từu sau her). The girl also send dùng quá khứ đơn her appreciation along with a patting chính tả for the female cleaner
The article status on the social network of Khairunnisa Afifah who is the daughter of the female cleaner has attracted attention and love likes from community networks. She tweeted on Twitter " My mom works as a cleaner at SJKC school. Today, I am so sensitive for things that the girl did for my mom. My mother's work and effort are appreciated".chú ý trích dẫn chính xác câu trực tiếp
The girl's name is Abigail Tan, 9 years old, in grade three, at SJKC school (Malaysia). Abigail sent her thanks to the female cleaner called Mak Cik. Apart from the adorable letter of appreciation, Abigail also drew an adorable painting for Ms. Mak Cik.
Status of the daughter of the female cleaner promptly was attracting dùng quá khứ đơn the attention of community networks, with approximately 40 shares and likes at that time.

 

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Điểm: 6.5