Time : 2019-09-18 16:19:36
Điểm: 7/10
A 9-year-old girl's letter thanking to the school laborer
The contents of the letter are not only praises from a girl to a laborer because she did her work very well. The girl also didn't forget to say the thanks as well as draw a picture to give her.

The sharing on the social network of Khairunnisa Afifah, the laborer's daughter, received the concern and love from network community. She wrote on Twitter: "My mother does the cleaning in SJKC school. Today, I am very emotional because of what she offer to mu mother. Work and efforts of my mother now are considered and appreciated."

The girl's name is Abigail Tan, 9 years old, grade 3 student, SJKC school (Malaysia). Abigail said the thanks to the her school laborer. In addition to a lovely letter, Abigail also present Mak Cik a cute picture.

The sharing status of the laborer's daughter rapidly received the concern of network community with nearly 40 shares and likes right in that time.

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A 9-year-old girl's letter thanking to the school laborer
The contents danh từ số ít of the letter are dùng thì quá khứ đơn và chia động từ theo chủ ngữ ngôi thứ ba số ít not only praises from a girl to a laborer because she did her work very well. The girl also didn't forget to say the thanks as well as draw a picture to give her.

The sharing dùng danh từ on the social network of Khairunnisa Afifah, the laborer's daughter, received the concern and love likes from network community. She wrote on Twitter: "My mother does the cleaning in SJKC school. Today, I am very emotional because of what she offer to mu mother. Work and efforts of my mother now are considered and appreciated."chú ý câu trích dẫn

The girl's name is Abigail Tan, 9 years old, 3rd grade 3 student, at SJKC school (Malaysia). Abigail said the thanks to the her school laborer. In addition to a lovely "thank you" letter, Abigail also present drew Mak Cik a cute picture.

The sharing status of the laborer's daughter rapidly received the concern of network community with nearly 40 shares and likes right in that time.

 

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Điểm: 6.5