Time : 2019-09-22 23:01:39
Điểm: 8/10
The letter about thanking female cleaner of the 9-year-old girl

In the letter, the girl sent compliments to the female cleaner because she has done her job very well. Moreover, the girl remembered to say thanks as well as draw a picture to give the female cleaner.

Khairunnisa Afifah who is daughter of the female cleaner shared her story on social network, and it has received a lot of regard and loving from network community. She wrote on Twitter: “My mother is a cleaner at SJKC school. Today, I have felt extreme emotion because of the things what the girl gave my mum. The works and efforts of my mother were recorded and rated high”.

The girl who is Abigail Tan is 9 years old, and she is in the third grade in SJKC school in Malaysia. Abigail sent her thanks to female cleaner whose name is Mak Cik. Abigail not only sent the cute thanks in the letter but also drew a funny picture to give Mrs. Mak Cik.

The sharing story on social network of female cleaner’s daughter which has been quickly interested by network community had nearly 40 shares and likes immediately.

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The letter about rút gọn mệnh đề quan hệ thành Ving sau danh từ thanking female cleaner of the 9-year-old girl

In the letter, the girl sent compliments to the female cleaner because she has done dùng quá khứ đơn vì hành động đã xảy ra và hoàn tất trong quá khứ her job very well. Moreover, the girl remembered to say thanks as well as draw a picture to give the female cleaner.

Khairunnisa Afifah who is daughter of the female cleaner shared her story on social network, and it has received a lot of regards and loving likes from network community. She wrote on Twitter: “My mother is a cleaner at SJKC school. Today, I have felt extreme emotion because of the things what the girl gave my mum. The works and efforts of my mother were recorded and rated high”.chú ý câu trích dẫn chính xác nhé

The girl who is Abigail Tan is 9 years old, and she is in the third grade in SJKC school in Malaysia. Abigail sent her thanks to female cleaner whose name is Mak Cik. Abigail not only sent the cute thanks in the letter but also drew a funny picture to give Mrs. Mak Cik.

The sharing story status on social network of female cleaner’s daughter which has been quickly interested by network community had nearly 40 shares and likes immediately.

 

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Điểm: 7.5